is there any thing i can add? from Jack 8/6/2021
Wednesday, 25 November 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Jack,
ReplyDeleteI love your title, that made me want to read your story. I liked how you have use speech marks to add to you speaking well done! Great to see you focused and completing your work, keep it up! Next step is to re read your story and ask if there is any more detail you could add? E.g the ending- how did that feel?
Miss Esselink
ok i,ll add that soon but not now
DeleteJack
IT MADE ME FEEL GOOD-BLUE
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